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whiddershins on Aug 27, 2023 | parent | context | favorite | on: Seven Sins of Writing

Woulda been awesome if the first sentence were written in passive voice.

jprete on Aug 27, 2023 [–]

Weak writing though. The sentences form a deliberate parallel structure, making it clear how the two voices differ.

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